I hate hypocrisy too! I'm going to have a read

I did kind of enjoy the story. Here's a few of my thoughts...

I thought the Young Man described the insect metaphor as he saw it a bit too well spoken, if that makes sense. I don't know if that's the kind of character you're going for, but perhaps the Young Man's dialog could be simplified?

The assassination was slightly off putting. I love a good assassination as much as the next guy (heck, my first brickfilm featured an assassin) but it kind of felt odd to me, almost as if it was an afterthought to the story.

Overall, looking good

It does work as an intellectual story, I'll give you that. I also did get that the assassin was putting on a fake persona, it still seemed a bit random.

Perhaps if you gave some subtle hint that the suited man is actually an assassin/spy of some sort in the opening scene that would help. Not enough to give it away, but enough to make the viewer think "aha!". Idea: Maybe one of the first shots could be the suited man sitting there and glancing at his target's photo, when he is distracted by the couple's fight outside. Then towards the end of his lecture, the target could walk past them into the bathroom (though not obviously).

Just trying to think of ways to tie it together more

I'm glad you enjoyed it! You don't see too many serious brickfilms, and i've always been about trying to break that boundary even more.

Not sure, like I said, VIM approached me, and it's in his hands now. Seeing as the script is good to go, he can easily jump on casting, and begin building and animating. I'd say sometime in the near future if he doesn't hit any issues.

Good luck VIM!

EDIT: Sorry wrong topic

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"Why in the world did you do a weird language if you know English?" - tenny1028

I agree with Sean on this one, it would make the assassination a bit more easier to understand.

-Tejas VIM