Re: Sets and Props Critique Thread
I don't have one.
welp
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I don't have one.
Hows about you make one out of bricks, like the one in this MOC:
A set for Operation Clearout. It's the open gate to an airfield. They breach through the door. The shot is only about 5 seconds but I've put loads of effort into the set anyway. Should be animating tonight.
My sig should be clickable for the Operation Clearout trailer very soon. Hope you all check it out!
Looks very good Splash.
I would add some rocks/stones to it.
I think that looks really good, Splash. But I think the door seems a bit wall-ish if you get what I'm saying. Maybe make it a different color, or change the design? Other than that, I think it's a pretty good set. 
Splash
I love it, it looks uniformal and abandoned.
Th only problem you seem to have is the two baseplates that "part" in the middle, other than that, excellent.
Pretty nice, it would be better, in my opinion, if you added some more details so it doesn't just look flat and boring.
Looks good Goliathan, my only problem with is is the couch area. I don't see how you would animate a minifigure navigating around the coffee table, unless you want to have him shimmy.
The question is, WILL he animate a minifig between table and couch?
Otherwise its possible to change in this time the cam-view on to other things.
I've also made the buildings taller and will add some blue "sky".
Ah, finally done modefeing this.
I made it back in 2007 originally, in 4 different colours.
(Big pictures)
Sadly this picture doesn't have all the new modefications. I made the last stuff on it today, and this picture's from yesterday.
I have now made the frontbumper a little higher, and adding some shields to the top of the wheelspan.
Before I modefied it, it was rather unstable, and fragile.
I fixed that, in an easy way. I added some plates underneath the car, and some in the back.
I also made the back a little more smooth.
I only got around modefeing the white one, I have two blacks, and one red. (And a Ghostbusters one)
Be aware, this picture is from December, 2007, first one of the cars.
-Jack.
Oh, come on. I used a great amount of time on this.
And I will hopefully get some new pictures in a moment, if my camera wants to co-operate. 
-Jack.
I don't like the the cone shaped lights on the back or the little covers over the headlights. They kind of ruin the look of the car and make it look a bit unfinished. It would also improve the smoothness if you did something about those 2 studs on the bonnet. The wind screen could do with a polish and perhaps attach a flat 1X6 brick to cover up the studs on top of the wind screen. Other than that its good.
-TDogg186
I think that the last photo of the police car was great! The only detail I would change is to take out/rotate the red sloping brick behind the seats.
Actually, that was the Ghostbuster's car.
Ah. Then I must revise my opinion.
A street I made. It's still a WIP, but give critique while I work at it. It needs lots of work. Sorry for large images.
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