Topic: Bill and Tom the Bunny
This is the script for my new film. Post your oppinions of it and how i could improve it
COMING HOME
Bill is sat down on the couch watching television. Tom comes through the front door, he is followed by a cute little bunny.
Bill: Tom what's that?
Tom: Well it's a bunny
Bill: Why's it not in a cage?
Tom: He thinks he's a dog
Bill: So your just gonna treat him like a dog!
Tom: Of course we are he acts just like a dog.
Bill: So basically he's a dog trapped in a rabbit's body
Tom: Exactly
Bill: where the hell did he get that?
Tom walks off towards the kitchen to get some food for the new pet. but realizes that there is no food to give him.
Tom: Bill,There's no food for Steve.
Bill:Who's Steve?
Tom: Our new dog of course. Can you go get him a steak from the co-op?
Bill: Fine
lettuce
Bill walks through the door and sees that Tom has bought a basket for Steve. Bill walks up to Tom and pulls out a bag of lettuce.
Tom: What's that?
Bill: We'll it's lettuce, for Steve
Tom: Lettuce, you bought Steve Lettuce, You bought lettuce for a Dog.
Bill: but he's a Rabbit for god sake.
Tom jumps at Steve and covers his ears. He turns his head around.
Tom: Don't say that to little Steve. he's a small little Puppy
Bill: Uhhhh, i give up there's no way I'm gonna get it through to you.
Tom: It's getting late I'm gonna go to Bed.
Bill: I might as well go to bed too, Maybe Tom will be a bit less idiotic in the morning.
Bill and Tom walk off to there bedrooms.
The burglary
Steve is sleeping in his new basket when he get's disturbed by a noise. the noise is coming from the from the front door. suddenly the door opens and a man walks into the house he then shuts the door very quietly. the man then walks into the house and attempt's to steal the Television.Steve goes up to The Burglar.
The Burglar: aw, look it's a little bunny.
Steve: Woof, Woof,woof ,woof,
The burglar: aw, it thinks its a dog
Steve jumps up at the man and bites him
The burglar: OW,OW,OW he's biting my crotch OW,OW,Ow
THE NEXT DAY
Bill is sleeping in his bed, Bill comes running in and says.
Tom: Bill, wake up, wake up.
Bill: what, What you waking me up for, it's seven am you stupid ginger
Tom: I'm not ginger, how can you say that you have a ginger fringe.
Bill: It's not ginger, its red I'm an emo don't you know.
Tom: we've been robbed you stupid idiot
Bill: Oh my God have they taken my stash of !@#$?
Tom: No they haven't our new dog Steve has killed the burglar.
Bill: So he is a dog trapped in a rabbits body after all.
Tom: Come on let's go and see !
Bill and Tom walk off out of the room and into the main room. when they get the main room they walk over to the dead body. Steve then walks up to Bill.
Bill: Steve, i guess i was wrong about you. your a good dog after all.
Tom: Yes he is bill, yes he is.
Bill: Tom you do know we now have to dispose of the dead body now.
-DL
Last edited by DarthLegoProductions (February 23, 2010 (10:20am))
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