Topic: Avante Garde Entry Idea.

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Ext., outside building, Mid-day.

Police officers surround a large building, all of them armed to the Teeth. The Camera Changes angles several times showing the introduction credits.

John: (walks on side walk to the S.W.A.T. Officer, camera changes between their faces during dialogue.) Are you Captain Miller?
Miller: Uh, yes, who are you?
John: John, John Barkley. Here with Ranger.
Miller: Oh we have been excepting you. Follow me; I’ll brief you on what’s going on.

They Both Walk down behind a barricade with a flimsy desk behind it.

Miller: We got the call around 10:21 this morning; four terrorists captured three civilians and are holding them hostage.
John: Any Intel on the Terrorists?
Miller: No, just that they are part of the Global Union Terrorist Organization.
John: Looks like you guys have a problem. Any demands?
Miller: hundred grand, a plane with a full tank a gas and a bus ‘outta here.
John: Mmm…Any easy ways in, besides the front?
Miller: Only one, the back door looks booby-trapped and the front is too risky. The only Secure way in is a ladder that leads to the boiler room.
John: Any windows?
Miller: Nope. Place is a Fortress. Buildin’ it right under our noses.
John: What are they armed with?
Miller: Two M-4’s and 2 AK’s. Not Modified.
John: Eh……Let’s Get this over with (cocks gun)

Camera Pans to the Building as John Scales the building. The Camera then changes to the roof where a ladder leads inside the building.
He then Hops down into the building and peaks around the corner of the wall. He spots a guard and quickly attaches a silencer to the end of his pistol.

John: Let’s Do this.

John turns around the corner and ends the guard with a bullet to the head.

John: One Down, three to go.

John continues down the hall then comes to another guard. He quickly rounds the corner and shoots the guard twice ending him as well.
John: Two down, two to go.

John walks a few paces to the door the Guard was near and places a small charge near the door.

John: This is your wake up call.

He sets the explosive off and inside the room the door slams into a guard killing him.

John Runs into the room and fires at the last terrorist but misses.

Terrorist: Ahh…John Barkley, a Ranger Commando.
John: Your Gunna die for what you’re doing.
Terrorist: Ahh but we are similar, we both used to affiliate with Ranger.
John: Your…You’re an ex-ranger?
Terrorist: You Could Say that. Let’s have a little duel, no weapons, just a pure fist fight. What do you say?
John: (drops his weapons and charges at him) AHHH!!!!!!!!!

John Misses the Terrorist and flips a knife out. He gets up hiding the knife and swings a punch at the Terrorist and it blocked then gets kicked in the chest. He gets up and is quickly thrown to the ground. The Terrorist pulls out a Pistol.

Terrorist: Any last words?
John: Yeah……Good Night.

John Swings his knife landing a blow and the Terrorist collapses in agony. John Gets up and releases the Hostages. The Scene then changes to back outside the building where John and Miller are talking.

Miller: I can’t thank you enough John.
John: Hey, don’t mention it.
Miller: We learned the guy you knifed was the CO for the GUTO in the States.
John: Heh, I guess I did my job.
Miller: (Salutes John)
John: (Salutes Back)

~~~END~~~

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Re: Avante Garde Entry Idea.

I suggest not making a movie with terrorists in it, you might offend someone!

Re: Avante Garde Entry Idea.

Who? Sensitive terrorists?
- Aaron

Re: Avante Garde Entry Idea.

Err...people who knew people who died in 9/11

Re: Avante Garde Entry Idea.

And those folks would be offended that someone made a film with terrorists as the antagonists? Are Jewish people offended by the Indiana Jones movies?
- Aaron

Re: Avante Garde Entry Idea.

You have a point

Re: Avante Garde Entry Idea.

Well, it seems like a really cool film!!!

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