Topic: Lockheed Rise of mortalitas

Hello there, I'm in the scripting process of making a new film called Lockheed: Rise of Mortalitas.

The basic story is an olympic runner is hit by a truck, and becomes paralysed.
After a while, a mysterious company called "Lockheed Martin" found by his coach gives him an experimental exo-suit.
This suit gives him enhanced abilities, and he trains to use it. After a while, he recieves a strange email telling him the truck accident was actually an attempted assassination, and that later that day the assassin would try again. The assassin does try again with a sniper rifle, and the runner chases him onto a rooftop. He beats the giblets out of the thug, and interrogates him. The thug says he was hired by "Spitzerhund", so the runner goes underground to find this "Spitzerhund".

Meanwhile, the police are struggling with random attacks and robberies on science and technology centres by a man who calls himself, "Mortalitas".

And that's pretty much all I've got... I have more ideas, but have yet to write them down.

Anything you think needs changing? Anything to add? Anything you want to know? Reply! mini/smile

Also, please don't steal my plot... mini/smile

Re: Lockheed Rise of mortalitas

Lockheed aren't mysterious they are making the new Orion spacecraft and are responsible for the B-2 stealth fighter bombers.

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Re: Lockheed Rise of mortalitas

They are in LEGO world. mini/XD

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The script is very good.
I wish I could think of something as good as that.

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Re: Lockheed Rise of mortalitas

I admit it is actually pretty good. Maybe change the name of "Spitzerhund," it sounds too much like an internet username. Other than that, I like it.

This would generally be the place where one would look to find a person's sense of humor. Good luck trying.

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OK, thanks for the feedback. mini/smile

Also, this probably won't be out of the scripting stage 'til atleast april.

Re: Lockheed Rise of mortalitas

I whish I had an Idea like that. It has the potential for an epic brickfilm.

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mini/eek

I had no idea people would like it so much.

You can all have parts in it if you like.

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Hmm, good idea, but don't make it one of those cliché superhero movies and keep working on the idea.
I have some questions though.
Why would the company give the special suit to a cripple ? Why would Spitzerhund want an olympic runner dead ? Who sent him an e-mail ?
Why does mortalis attacks randomly and how ? Does he also have powers or something ? Not just everyone can just rob etc. without getting caught.

This idea has potential, keep working on it. Good job mini/smile

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Because they need a test subject that can take the suit to it's limits, and that they can keep an eye on. What's better than a crippled olympic superstar? mini/smile

Because he's a gangster. The rest I won't reveal yet, as it plays a major part in the film.

Aha, another mystery, eh?

Mortalitas attacks 'randomly', because he want's something. It's not actually random, it just seems that way to the police.

And well, not exactly powers, but with special technology he has tweaked, he more or less does, yeah.

Hope that answered your queries, deary. =P

Re: Lockheed Rise of mortalitas

How long do you reckon it's gonna be? 10 mins?

Re: Lockheed Rise of mortalitas

Possibly just over 10-11 minutes.