Just Kidden wrote:lol, we already have a releases forum where everyone can review films.
But still, most people don't get their films reviewed by anyone at all.
I'll start out.
Here's my film "Brickfilm VS Claymation". Vimeo.
-JK
Haha, I remember watching this when it came out. x) And wow, my first review...let's see how I should start it....
Pros: Animation, music sound quality, lighting, character design.
Cons: Camera Bumps, volume level on voice, Voice acting, brightness
Well, I find your little short to be pretty entertaining...I mean, let's face it, everyone enjoys these type of videos. Plus, I haven't seen a version that is claymation VS Brickfilm, so nice job on the idea. Also, I also really liked "Claymation"'s design...the way you made him look was old and well, ugly. So that matched pretty well I thought. The music sound quality was great as well, you got a good copy of the song!
The only problems I can see are the camera bumps, voice acting, the volume of your voice, and the brightness. The camera bumps aren't too bad, but in your next videos, try to avoid them best you can. Your voice acting was decent, however, at times I can hear you blowing into the microphone, and that just doesn't give the viewer the feeling that the characters are talking, but rather, the feeling someone is recording their voice. So try to avoid that as well. Also, the volume on your voice was way too low, making it hard to hear your voice over the music. So next time, make sure the viewer can hear your voice loud and clear (not too loud, just a little louder then the music). The last thing I would like to point out is the lighting, which is good overall, but it is just a tad too bright. The LEGO man was almost washed out! I believe if you lowered the brightness just a little, it would be perfect.
All in all, it is a entertaining short that is worth watching. My final overall rating would be 6.5/10. Good job indeed! ^^
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