Topic: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

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Finally got it out. Sorry that I didn't get it out sooner. I'm in the process of moving, and my room is in shambles.
Thank you to all my voice actors! mini/smile

-JK

Last edited by Just Kidden (November 13, 2011 (08:01pm))

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Re: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

Pretty funny, although the ending was a bit disappointing. The roof scene could have benefited a lot from better/more animation and better sound editing. mini/smile

Re: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

You could improve by making sounds for example, when

Spoiler (highlight to read)Santa fell off the roof

there could have been a sound for hitting the ground.

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Re: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

Yeah, I was struggling with sound effects because I am moving and my computer does not have Internet connection. My next film will be better next time when my studio is all set up again.

-JK

Last edited by Just Kidden (December 26, 2009 (11:48am))

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Re: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

mini/sad  That's a bummer. Good luck on your next film.

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Hey hey hey, it's only been a fraction of a day mini/tongue

Anyways, I liked it! The quality was pretty good, the voice acting was amazing by everyone, and the animation was nice and smooth. The set was pretty plain, maybe add some posters or pictures to the walls? Overall, it was pretty good. I don't think it was your best work, but it was very satisfying. mini/bigsmile

Re: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

I was getting tired of refreshing the page. mini/tongue
But yeah, I know it wasn't my best. As I've said before, my room is not in it's studio form, so it was hard to animate the last part.

-JK

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Re: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

As everyone had said before, Santa needed a sound effect when he fell and was mauled by squirrels.
Also, you needed to probably hold the image of his "Christmas Tree" longer; at 1:31 or so.
Other than that, the film was pretty well done. It makes me wish I had time for a Christmas film, now. mini/tongue

Re: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

MooCJ, The Christmas Tree picture originally was longer, but when I exported it, it made it shorter. I don't know how it happened, and it wasn't in my favor. But thanks! mini/smile

-JK

Last edited by Just Kidden (December 27, 2009 (02:23pm))

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Re: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

"My Santa Detector is Beaping!" LOL.

I liked that film JK. Maybe with the Santa falling off the roof bit you could have recorded a sound
effect that sounds like a bump with your microphone because you had no Interent Connection.

Re: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

Man, that guy moves fast for an old man.
That was good, I forgot I was in this, that was a funny surprise when I heard my voice. mini/smile
Funny movie too, bit of an anti-climactic ending though that's all.

Re: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

filmyguy wrote:

Man, that guy moves fast for an old man.

Haha, yeah. He's hyper. mini/tongue

filmyguy wrote:

Funny movie too, bit of an anti-climactic ending though that's all.

Yeah, I could have made it longer or better or something if I had the space and time to do it.

Homerball wrote:

Maybe with the Santa falling off the roof bit you could have recorded a sound
effect that sounds like a bump with your microphone because you had no Interent Connection.

I thought of that, but the problem was that my microphone was still in a box somewhere. mini/tongue
Uggh, I am so glad I am not moving again until I go to college. mini/tongue

Thanks, everyone! mini/bigsmile

-JK

Last edited by Just Kidden (December 27, 2009 (09:06am))

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Re: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

I am very impressed!
I lol'd.

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Re: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

A creative, notcha-everyday-Christmas-special-type-thing.

I personally think Girl Scouts are annoying too. LOL

Have you seen a big-chinned boy?

Re: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

omarnol wrote:

A creative, notcha-everyday-Christmas-special-type-thing.

I personally think Girl Scouts are annoying too. LOL

Omarnol please do not bring up old topics.

I'm working on getting my studio back up and running, so stay posted...

Re: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

Bumping topics in the release forum is okay.
It's not good when all you have to say is "lol" or anything like that.

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Re: Jeffery and The Old Man: Christmas Special

Sorry.:(

Have you seen a big-chinned boy?