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Just My Luck

The Creative Kid Workshop

Two joyriding thieves steal from a motorist stuck in traffic.

The second film by the Creative Kid Workshop.

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Thank you for taking the time to view our film. Would love any constructive feedback or reviews That I can share with my students. mini/smile

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I like this. Its a nice setup, and I especially like the use of stones for rocks. I also liked the twist in the end. I really enjoyed it, well done mini/smile

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William, thank you for taking the time to watch our new brick film. Your comments are encouraging and very appreciated!

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Not bad! The story was well connected, and the single line was comedic. Some advice that I would give is to use some sticky tac to make the stones and other objects stay in place so they don't move around unintentionally. Using a more convincing walk/run cycle may also help (Here's a good tutorial: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ojxKhLtmimY ).

All in all, it was a pretty good film, even though the animation was a bit rough. Keep it up!

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rioforce wrote:

Not bad! The story was well connected, and the single line was comedic. Some advice that I would give is to use some sticky tac to make the stones and other objects stay in place so they don't move around unintentionally. Using a more convincing walk/run cycle may also help (Here's a good tutorial: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ojxKhLtmimY ).

All in all, it was a pretty good film, even though the animation was a bit rough. Keep it up!


RioForce, thank you for taking the time to watch our film and comment. We appreciate your feedback and will watch the tutorial. Thanks again for your encouragement and being a leader on Bricks in Motion!