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BATTLE OF IWO JIMA

BATTLE OF IWO JIMA

This is a short World War II stop motion video about the battle of Iwo Jima!

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The practical effects and animation were really good! The sound effects sounded like sound effects though (meaning they weren't very good), and I felt that the minifigs should've had voices like grunts and screams, that would've made the plastic figures relatable. Also the flame thrower could've had a sound, this way it felt kinda sloppy. All in all it wasn't a bad short, but it could've been WAY better if you worked a little more on it.

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The sound in this video was probably the biggest problem. There were a few missing ones, and the ones that were in it felt alone. An atmosphere sound effect could have helped. Though with that said, I really liked your in house effects, and your animation has definitely improved. All in all, I thought this wasn't a pretty bad short. Good job! mini/bigsmile

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