I'm guessing this is the video?
You're taking a decent number of frames, but you could do with running them at a faster frames-per-second. Using a tripod and making sure your set is taped/tacked down will avoid set bump and camera shake, which you have a lot of. Still, not a bad brickfilm by any means! (though I personally don't really like gore in brickfilms when it involves tearing up a minifig, something about it is kind of unsettling to me, though that's personal opinion)
EDIT: I've fixed your links as best I can, but please don't make more than one post for a single brickfilm.
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