Re: Cinematography Challenge (Read Rules First)
I think you're trying too hard brain wave :s
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I think you're trying too hard brain wave :s
Come on guys, keep them coming! So far no one has made a pic that even comes close to rivaling Stud's.
Stud's pic makes me sad ![]()
Yeah, that's why he's winning. He fit the theme perfectly.
Well, do you still have it? If so, I can change it back to 'Unfeeling'. It won't effect the other entries, as they will still fit the theme.
okay, so what now?
Done.
Cinematographically, none of the entries have impressed me, not even Stud's. While his image reflects the theme well, the lighting is pretty plain and the framing is awkwardly shifted to the left, leaving a lot of blank space on the right.
Well, okay then, how come you don't enter these contests anymore?
Cinematographically, none of the entries have impressed me, not even Stud's. While his image reflects the theme well, the lighting is pretty plain and the framing is awkwardly shifted to the left, leaving a lot of blank space on the right.
Yes, those were the things I was going to critique when I judged, though I guess I could have gone ahead and told him that. I would have liked a more of a dark alley setting or something like that, some dead people around him, like his family or other children. And yes, I have a dark mind.
Making one as we speak... I have a good feeling about this one...
EDIT: And here we go.

And a bit brighter
Last edited by Spudster (January 6, 2010 (10:00pm))
I'm in the process of making an entry, but when's the deadline now, because surely they should have been judged a couple of days ago.
EDIT: Didn't come out quite as I'd hoped, but nevermind, here it is:

Last edited by CheesyBricks (January 7, 2010 (11:41am))
Well, okay then, how come you don't enter these contests anymore?
I currently lack the materials and time (and, frankly, interest). However, that doesn't mean I can't offer my own comments or criticism of other people's work.
okay. sorry.

better is:

Last edited by A. (January 7, 2010 (06:40pm))
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