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The castle looks great!
Things that I noticed:
The water has random plates that stick up above the other water. This isn't to big a deal, but doesn't look the best.
The castle is kinda empty. I am guessing that that is something you had already noticed.
The stone platform the castle is on could use a bit more vegetation growing on/next to it.
The castle is looking amazing.
These are just things that I noticed. Take it or leave it, it doesn't matter to me (too much).

Keep up the good work!

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That looks awesome. I love how you made such a big set, it really looks like a castle. Keep up the good work.

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I think I will take your advice Rivvm m, and make all of the water plates even.
I am glad you like the set osomstudios and Rivvm m.

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That castle is beautiful it actually reminds me of brother bricks castle, while the water does seem to end its not unusual or bad at all. Back in history, the defenders always made these artificial lake for defense known as moats. A moat is a deep, broad ditch, either dry or filled with water, that surrounds a castle, fortification, building or town, historically to provide it with a preliminary line of defence. In some places moats evolved into more extensive water defences, including natural or artificial lakes, dams and sluices.

The only thing I was wondering was whether the castle to the left <<< was to close to the end? Otherwise I think its great.

Really looking forward to this keep up the good work mate.

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I am glad you think its really good!
Here is a better picture of the castle with more built around it!
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/4c/6f/86/4c6f86188c5986c74a032420a6329c25.jpg
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/e7/ee/bd/e7eebda84ee2d5c087583f33ac064db6.jpg

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That looks really cool, I really like the way you extended the water and aded trees. On thing I might do is in the back underneath the big tower were it looks like theres a bit of a overhang ad some columns or something so that it doesn't look like its just hanging over the edge[unless its not going to be in camera]. Over all though it really looks nice.

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https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/ac/01/8b/ac018bd2df2dfe051ef32281d1a2ab01.jpg

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That's awesome! I love that castle. I wish I could build a castle that large. I can't wait to see it in action. mini/bigsmile

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Production has gone kind of slow this month, but don't worry I am going a little faster and Today I just started my first castle fight scenes. Here is a picture that was taken today! Please critique!
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/9b/9d/92/9b9d924dcfb047a82f37835bc1dc070e.jpg
Sorry that I haven't been posting many pictures but I have been really busy.

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Looks nice, you might want to make it a little less blue, though. While things at night tend to be blue-ish, they aren't really that blue. Also, if you could somehow make some convent moonlight shine on his face, it would make hims stand out more. Other than that, I really like the frame! Looking forward to seeing this film!

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I have Decided to make the ground clay in Relentless Heart (Fairmere), . Oh and I positioned a light to make it look like the moon is casting some light on the right side of the castle. I have redone some animation, so if you scroll up the page the picture of the castle and castle wall will be updated.

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Here is a picture of my castle with clay, but if you want to see the production frame version scroll up the page were I updated it. https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/0f/25/13/0f25133ccd077236205f374f197479e8.jpg I know a lot of you probably won't like clay vs using Lego baseplates, but I like the clay for its more organic feel.

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Rioforce would know how much I would like a castle like this for a script I have...

Wow amazing job!

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I have been a away from bricksinmotion forums for little while until two days ago so I thought I might give some Eye candy here is a clip from a scene I have added into the script.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B45VC6 … sp=sharing
Hope you like it, and please critique.
Also I changed my main characters look so here is Leafar 2.0
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Well here are some more pics of the film production!  These Pictures are from a scene I have added!
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/a8/af/36/a8af360d4ab9c6a4801f32171e4d0ddc.jpg

https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/7c/5d/b2/7c5db214647aca560dc3f52fa55317f4.jpg

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Wow this film looks like it'll be pretty cool and I'm really liking the Castle setup with the clay ground. Looking forward to seeing it completed.

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A lot of scenes have been deleted and are going to be redone. That is mostly because I have been participating in contests and it has approved my animation since I first started this film. But I am continuing this project now and here is a quick frame!
https://lh5.googleusercontent.com/-jzngpX7xXZ0/VjgCku3zwkI/AAAAAAAABFs/qnqqnYK5SY4/w1044-h437-no/Relentless_0000000015_0000000001_0001.jpg

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That frame looks great, rafael!

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Sadly I started this film over, but now I have 2 minutes of animation. I am much more proud of my animation, and here is a few good pics.

https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/ac/85/58/ac8558845a67e47b49432e5a715bd5e8.jpg
I now its low resolution here, but in the film it will be much better quality.

Here is another pic from a shot.
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/a8/c0/a2/a8c0a2bcba5a217c90a6f2eef40c6f72.jpg

I will be posting more pics soon, so stay tuned!

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I really like the lighting in the second frame. mini/bigsmile  The first frame feels a bit dark (and maybe out of focus, at least on those guys on the right).