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My entry for Bricks in motion's 2010 competition.
The theme was Avant-Garde.
PLOT: a boy makes a brickfilm...
please coment and review.
Hope you like it! 
Last edited by Jed277.tv (July 25, 2010 (05:42am))
It was Ok, just a better frame rate would make it a lot smoother.
The sets could also use some work, but on the whole I thought it wasen't bad. 
You need a higher frame rate aand you need to secure your camera so it doesn't shake around. Also, a brickfilm about a guy making a brickfilm has been done many times before.
Cheers 
As everybody said, you definitely need a higher frame rate, & there was also a lot of light flicker. Also, as STP said, you need to secure your camera (we also have the same problem), & the story has been done before. This is a good effort, but it doesn't seem good enough to win in our opinion. Sorry for being so harsh, we just couldn't find any other softer way to put it. 1/5.
Fairs fair , first competition I appreciate the comments and will try much harder in my next film... 
Thanks Sam
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