• Joined: December 4, 2010

Topic: Bless you [Past and future]

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Bless you [Past and future]

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a man sneezes to the future

my entry to the bricks in motion summer competition past and future

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As a mortal, I was called by the name Duffcow56. That time has passed. I am now Duffosaur, ravager of worlds. Look on me and despair.
  • Location: Korvige, Finland
  • Joined: December 31, 2008

Re: Bless you [Past and future]

Some good concepts, believable voice acting and engaging characters there. I like the camera move to go with the sneeze. Some of the walk cycles were inventive. I didn’t care for the ending and the post-production effects were distracting. 4/5 stars I think

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  • Location: Oregon
  • Joined: December 29, 2012

Re: Bless you [Past and future]

Overall, I'd say this is a simple but entertaining entry.  Good job.

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