I liked the story, although I found it very hard to hear what he was saying throughout the film. You need to work on your sound editing, to make sure we can hear what is being said. Also, I don't think it was necessary to use a sound effect for every time he moved. It got a little bit repetitive and wasn't really needed. However, the story was the strongest element of the film, and by far the most important. Even if it was hard to hear what he was saying sometimes, I could understand what was going on and was able to follow it well. If you had the time, you probably would have had more focus on his time on the ship. Although we get a basic idea of time going by, it is a little rushed. But I really can't fault you for that, as you only had 24 hours. So overall, a pretty good entry. It had a really neat story, and overall it was well executed!