Like the first part, I enjoyed this video. My only gripes would be that the animation isn't 100% (but then again, neither is mine
) and you have a lot of effect shots, but they are a bit dodgy at times, which detracts from the overall film. What software do you use? It would be easier to give you advice if I knew, and I want to help since you've written quite a cool, original series. I mean, the whole thing reminds me of Hellblazer/Dresden Files, but these are your own characters and stuff, right?
Like I said, overall I like this.
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