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BRAWL 2011: The Case of David Brickston
My BRAWL 2011 Entry.
BRAWLumentry up soon.
The BiM credits were not working so here is the credits:
Directed By: LegoAndStickfigs and Mr.Rundown101
Animator: LegoAndStickfigs
Written By: LegoAndStickfigs & Mr.Rundown101
Voiced By: Mr.Rundown101, LegoAndStickfigs, and DarthVincentPrice
Music: Kevin MacLeod
-LASF
Last edited by LASF (August 15, 2011 (05:36am))
It was okay, but way too disjointed. I also don't like it when a person in a film says "I am going to this." and then does it. 2,5/5
I was a little bit confused throughout the whole thing. I guess it wasnt terrible though.
I was a little bit confused throughout the whole thing.
Hm. Could you explain how, please?
I guess it wasnt terrible though.
What did you rate it, though?
EDIT: Oh crap, double post, sorry.
-LASF
Last edited by LASF (August 15, 2011 (11:14am))
I personally think you're definitely improving. Better animation, set design. Overall good job!
I personally think you're definitely improving. Better animation, set design. Overall good job!
Thanks, Onion! 
Set design
Awesome! This is my first brickfilm with an actually good set design! 
-LASF
Last edited by LASF (August 15, 2011 (03:36pm))
What was everyone's favorite part
I see you are definitely improving. Keep going on and you will make some very good films.
What was everyone's favorite part
I'd like to know, too.
I see you are definitely improving. Keep going on and you will make some very good films.
Wow, thanks!
I hope everyone liked it!
-LASF
Anything else anyone wants to say until it sinks to the depths of the Release forum?
-LASF
I liked the beginning, then, when it reaches half way through the film, everything gets confusing, everything happens too fast, too many characters come in. I understand it might not be the case to say "take your time to do things", since it was brawl, but for everything else, take your time to make things understandable. Also, follow Pillow's suggestion, that will help. Overall, it was not bad, and you're improving a lot. I'm looking forward to your next movies. 3/5
I liked the beginning, then, when it reaches half way through the film, everything gets confusing, everything happens too fast, too many characters come in. I understand it might not be the case to say "take your time to do things", since it was brawl, but for everything else, take your time to make things understandable. Also, follow Pillow's suggestion, that will help. Overall, it was not bad, and you're improving a lot. I'm looking forward to your next movies. 3/5
Yeah, it fell apart at the arrest. I was going to do more like the arrest, the forrest scene, the court, then the capture of the rest of the guys, and half of the last scene but something dying in my computer so it was being really slow. Also, legoandstickfigs changed a few things without telling me so we could have made a shorter script so he would have more time to animate the rest of the scenes.
MPfist0 wrote:I liked the beginning, then, when it reaches half way through the film, everything gets confusing, everything happens too fast, too many characters come in. I understand it might not be the case to say "take your time to do things", since it was brawl, but for everything else, take your time to make things understandable. Also, follow Pillow's suggestion, that will help. Overall, it was not bad, and you're improving a lot. I'm looking forward to your next movies. 3/5
Yeah, it fell apart at the arrest. I was going to do more like the arrest, the forrest scene, the court, then the capture of the rest of the guys, and half of the last scene but something dying in my computer so it was being really slow. Also, legoandstickfigs changed a few things without telling me so we could have made a shorter script so he would have more time to animate the rest of the scenes.
If I didn't change anything, it would have been late. We're planning on a sequel though the sequel won't be for BRAWL so we'll have more time. Though I managed to put together a forest scene out of Playmobil parts and a green baseplate. Though the fight scene turned out quite well, I think.
-LASF
Mr.Rundown101 wrote:MPfist0 wrote:I liked the beginning, then, when it reaches half way through the film, everything gets confusing, everything happens too fast, too many characters come in. I understand it might not be the case to say "take your time to do things", since it was brawl, but for everything else, take your time to make things understandable. Also, follow Pillow's suggestion, that will help. Overall, it was not bad, and you're improving a lot. I'm looking forward to your next movies. 3/5
Yeah, it fell apart at the arrest. I was going to do more like the arrest, the forrest scene, the court, then the capture of the rest of the guys, and half of the last scene but something dying in my computer so it was being really slow. Also, legoandstickfigs changed a few things without telling me so we could have made a shorter script so he would have more time to animate the rest of the scenes.
If I didn't change anything, it would have been late. We're planning on a sequel though the sequel won't be for BRAWL so we'll have more time. Though I managed to put together a forest scene out of Playmobil parts and a green baseplate. Though the fight scene turned out quite well, I think.
-LASF
Yeah I know. I think I could of helped make it shorter but I guess it dosen't matter now
Well, here's a suggestion, just quote the part of the post you're interested with: posts are becoming very long.
I'm certainly looking forward to the sequel, just make sure to make everything the best you can if you have time. Keep up the good work.
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