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			<title><![CDATA[Re: "The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[[quote=pizzaboy]I can play as the Gas clerk.....if i can send me a pm[/quote]


Gas Clerk is taken....]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Tue, 20 Jan 2009 18:23:04 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: "The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[I can play as the Gas clerk.....if i can send me a pm]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Tue, 20 Jan 2009 06:34:15 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: "The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/11421/#p11421</link>
			<description><![CDATA[It's good. 

Just two comments/questions:
- Why does Sean ask if someone is in the men's room if he's at home (there are very rarely people in the men's room in [i]my[/i] house without me knowing! (Unless my wife has certain secrets for me...))
- Exactly how do they pull the prank, how did they know what numbers to use on a fake ticket, when did they do it, etc... Maybe you could make the viewer an accomplice in the prank? Or explain using a flashback in the kitchen?

Eitherway, I'd happily record (provided I get my mic to work) any of the voices for you, if you don't object to a rather stupid sounding, deep voice (i.e. mine) and a noticeable foreign accent. Just shoot me an e-mail if you want to take me up on this offer.

-PG]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Sat, 17 Jan 2009 19:38:11 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: "The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/8633/#p8633</link>
			<description><![CDATA[i liked it! ill be looking forward to it]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Gree)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Fri, 09 Jan 2009 23:46:18 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: "The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/7541/#p7541</link>
			<description><![CDATA[[quote=TheNoodle26]Oh. Well, I read this one, and I'm a little confused what happens at the end. Other than that, looks good.[/quote]

Oh, you find out that they pranked him, they go to tell him, then he shouts.... really badly..... ya.....]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Wed, 07 Jan 2009 02:00:58 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: "The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Oh. Well, I read this one, and I'm a little confused what happens at the end. Other than that, looks good.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Noodle)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Wed, 07 Jan 2009 01:50:19 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: "The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/7483/#p7483</link>
			<description><![CDATA[[quote=TheNoodle26]What happened to [url=http://www.bricksinmotion.com/forums/topic/293/jason-bourne-is-dead/]this[/url]?[/quote]

Oh, that, it is still happening, this is just a short one while i wait for some new lego sets i ordered for it to come in the mail. ;)]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Wed, 07 Jan 2009 00:03:19 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: "The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/7453/#p7453</link>
			<description><![CDATA[What happened to [url=http://www.bricksinmotion.com/forums/topic/293/jason-bourne-is-dead/]this[/url]?]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Noodle)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Tue, 06 Jan 2009 22:59:59 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: "The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/7222/#p7222</link>
			<description><![CDATA[It sounds great! I'd like play the role Sean.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (mcoov)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Tue, 06 Jan 2009 19:32:08 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA["The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/6952/#p6952</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Here's my new comedy brickfilm, the lottery, based on something that happened to one of my friends family.(except i over-dramatized the gloating...) I also need voice actors for the clerk, TV Announcer, Sebastian, And Sean, so check the Audio section for the full over view. But, without further 'a' do, I give you: THE LOTTERY by KJW

[url]http://pc.celtx.com/project/8wO5aqrV0ltb/view/http://celtx.com/res/1kEqvojZWTHA[/url]]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Tue, 06 Jan 2009 05:10:11 +0000</pubDate>
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