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		<title><![CDATA[Forums - Bricks in Motion - The Script Improvement Thread]]></title>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: The Script Improvement Thread]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/237845/#p237845</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Grammars not my strong point :P 

It would be great if you could tell me where the format needs editing and i can fix it up. 
Also how long do you think it would be? I'm thinking maybe 10 minutes but I haven't got much experience with longer Brickfilms]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (MovingBricks)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Wed, 17 Aug 2011 02:32:41 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: The Script Improvement Thread]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/237824/#p237824</link>
			<description><![CDATA[[quote=MovingBricks]here's the full script

[url]https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&pid=explorer&chrome=true&srcid=0B4Dft9hdhE3YOWQ4Nzc4ZWItOTFmNy00NmY4LTkyMGItYzQzNDRkZGIzNmE1&hl=en_GB[/url][/quote]

That was okay but try correcting your grammar and edit your script format a bit. [url=http://www.bricksinmotion.com/forums/topic/11253/how-to-write-a-professionallyformatted-screenplay/]This[/url] might help you.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Thunderbolt)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Wed, 17 Aug 2011 00:26:01 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: The Script Improvement Thread]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/237585/#p237585</link>
			<description><![CDATA[here's the full script

[url]https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&pid=explorer&chrome=true&srcid=0B4Dft9hdhE3YOWQ4Nzc4ZWItOTFmNy00NmY4LTkyMGItYzQzNDRkZGIzNmE1&hl=en_GB[/url]]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (MovingBricks)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Tue, 16 Aug 2011 06:20:21 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: The Script Improvement Thread]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/234289/#p234289</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Here's the first scene from my new film I'm working on. 
[url]https://docs.google.com/leaf?id=0B4Dft9hdhE3YYWRmODE0YzgtMWNmYS00YjNjLThkMDQtY2Q3NmU5ZDI2YjRj&hl=en_GB[/url]
I should have the full script done by next week sometime but just thought i'd get some feedback on what i've done so far.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (MovingBricks)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Fri, 05 Aug 2011 07:32:52 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: The Script Improvement Thread]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/227068/#p227068</link>
			<description><![CDATA[[quote=Golden]Yes it is. Script "Improvement" Thread, perhaps?[/quote]

Fixed.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Thunderbolt)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Mon, 04 Jul 2011 06:12:40 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: The Script Improvement Thread]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/227019/#p227019</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Loool. Nice, Ratboy.

Hope you realise nobody talks like that anymore though. :P]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Brickyman)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sun, 03 Jul 2011 22:55:23 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: The Script Improvement Thread]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/227009/#p227009</link>
			<description><![CDATA[I'll start. [url=http://ratboyproductions.com/storage/Cockney Slang Sketch.pdf]Heres a script[/url] that I want to make into a Comedic Live Action sketch. Its about two builders who talk Cockney Slang. 

Now Cockney Slang originates from London and they use rhyming words to replace normal words, if you catch my drift. So town might be replaced by Bobby Brown. Sometimes you wouldn't have a clue what they mean, but I think in this sketch you may get an idea :P

I've made a couple of mistakes which I'll have to adjust later.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[joshua@ratboyproductions.com (Ratboy Productions)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sun, 03 Jul 2011 21:30:35 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: The Script Improvement Thread]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/226998/#p226998</link>
			<description><![CDATA[I don't write scripts. :)
I make up an idea, then I fill in the blanks with improvisation whilst animating or in between shots.
I don't see how you could improvise a script...]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Squid)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sun, 03 Jul 2011 20:53:30 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: The Script Improvement Thread]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/226995/#p226995</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Yes it is. Script "Improvement" Thread, perhaps?]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Golden)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sun, 03 Jul 2011 20:43:47 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: The Script Improvement Thread]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/226977/#p226977</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Isn't improvisation "making something up as-you-go-along"?]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (mcoov)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sun, 03 Jul 2011 19:13:54 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: The Script Improvement Thread]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/226933/#p226933</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Why is it called the script "improvisation" thread when it's just to get feedback? Good thread idea, though.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[vik12312@hotmail.com (Pillow)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sun, 03 Jul 2011 16:10:03 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: The Script Improvement Thread]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/226894/#p226894</link>
			<description><![CDATA[[quote=Thunderbolt]NOTE: While it's not a no no, I recommend you not to show scripts with language or sexual content.[/quote]
Couldn't you just give a warning beforehand?
Anyway, I like the idea of this thread. I may be posting something here soon.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Danimation)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sun, 03 Jul 2011 11:26:34 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[The Script Improvement Thread]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/226892/#p226892</link>
			<description><![CDATA[This is a place where you can show your scripts for people to give constructive criticism, ways to improve it etc. You can also post film ideas, but you'd rather post 'em [url=http://www.bricksinmotion.com/forums/topic/101/post-your-story-ideas/]here.[/url] Have fun!

NOTE: While it's not a no no, I recommend you not to show scripts with language or sexual content.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Thunderbolt)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sun, 03 Jul 2011 11:13:39 +0000</pubDate>
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