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		<title><![CDATA[Forums - Bricks in Motion - Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/221475/#p221475</link>
			<description><![CDATA[I would be interested in reading it.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (MPfist0)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sun, 12 Jun 2011 15:17:56 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/221466/#p221466</link>
			<description><![CDATA[MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE to!]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (topit)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sun, 12 Jun 2011 14:07:37 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/221419/#p221419</link>
			<description><![CDATA[As would I.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[jetpackcat@gmail.com (WelcomeToAwesomeness)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sun, 12 Jun 2011 05:14:25 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/221416/#p221416</link>
			<description><![CDATA[I'd like to see it. PM me please.

-JK]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Just Kidden)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sun, 12 Jun 2011 04:35:25 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/221180/#p221180</link>
			<description><![CDATA[But, I'm living underneath your house, and using your wi-fi. They're gonna track me down to your house, AA :P

I'm half-way done with the script, btw. It's great! I'll send you a full review soon.

EDIT: Sent. I enjoyed it, just a couple of problems, but it's great.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Living LEGO)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Fri, 10 Jun 2011 19:41:29 +0000</pubDate>
			<guid>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/221180/#p221180</guid>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/221011/#p221011</link>
			<description><![CDATA[[quote=Living LEGO]Shoot me a PM, please.[/quote]

Over here in Australia a "PM" is Prime Minster, the guy that rules the country, Living Lego, looks like the Feds will be coming after you....
AA]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Cooked Cat)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Thu, 09 Jun 2011 23:12:31 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/220994/#p220994</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Okay, I think that's enough.  Thank you all for volunteering.
[b]EDIT:[/b] Once I get back all reviews then I re-create the script and then another 5 people can read it.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[harrypound54@gmail.com (Binding Brick)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Thu, 09 Jun 2011 21:36:38 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/220992/#p220992</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Shoot me a PM, please.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Living LEGO)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Thu, 09 Jun 2011 21:34:33 +0000</pubDate>
			<guid>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/220992/#p220992</guid>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/220989/#p220989</link>
			<description><![CDATA[PM meh?]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Onion)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Thu, 09 Jun 2011 21:03:39 +0000</pubDate>
			<guid>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/220989/#p220989</guid>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/220988/#p220988</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Critique sent. Interesting story.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Squash)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Thu, 09 Jun 2011 21:02:07 +0000</pubDate>
			<guid>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/220988/#p220988</guid>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/220986/#p220986</link>
			<description><![CDATA[[quote=VanderFlame Studios]PM me! What do you want me to critique in it?[/quote]
Story, and how I wrote the dialogue.  This is book to script.  Or short story to script so I want to see if you like how it was done.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[harrypound54@gmail.com (Binding Brick)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Thu, 09 Jun 2011 20:27:54 +0000</pubDate>
			<guid>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/220986/#p220986</guid>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/220982/#p220982</link>
			<description><![CDATA[PM me! What do you want me to critique in it?]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (VanderFlame Studios)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Thu, 09 Jun 2011 20:18:51 +0000</pubDate>
			<guid>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/220982/#p220982</guid>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/220980/#p220980</link>
			<description><![CDATA[I'd be interested in reading it.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Squash)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Thu, 09 Jun 2011 20:17:18 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/220976/#p220976</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Pm me if you want i'll read it]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Duffosaur)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Thu, 09 Jun 2011 20:00:04 +0000</pubDate>
			<guid>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/220976/#p220976</guid>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Anyone Want to Critique my Script?]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/220967/#p220967</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Thanks.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Lego9663 Studios)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Thu, 09 Jun 2011 19:33:06 +0000</pubDate>
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