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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Help me with my script]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/215901/#p215901</link>
			<description><![CDATA[I can't use any copirighted music, but I can probably use garage band to develope a custom soundtrack.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (legostothemax)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Thu, 12 May 2011 22:18:41 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Help me with my script]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/215848/#p215848</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Also, when you introduce Jake on his motorcycle, have him riding along to a really good song...

I'd reccomend AC/DC's Back In Black, or War Machine.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (Brickyman)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Thu, 12 May 2011 14:50:33 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Help me with my script]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/215820/#p215820</link>
			<description><![CDATA[I reckon it's good so far. I agree with TitanPictures but with that it'd be great. As you progress through the movie you'll find opportunities for action. like the good ole getaway scene. you're main characters that have the artefact and are escaping from the tomb or whatever, then you should have the opportunity for a shootout. you might havee the good guys being chased by the flying mummies or whatever and a guy manning the machine gun.
There's a few tips.
P.S: don't restart you're film. it'll just take a little while to heat up. Good for suspense!  :DD]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (The War Film Guru)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Thu, 12 May 2011 08:25:04 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Help me with my script]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/215308/#p215308</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Hmmm, interesting I will probably have to film an extra 5 minutes but in the end it will be worth it.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (legostothemax)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sun, 08 May 2011 15:43:03 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Help me with my script]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/215210/#p215210</link>
			<description><![CDATA[[quote=legostothemax]like show the past when amset was alive?[/quote]

Yup... That way you build something up.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (TitanPictures)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sun, 08 May 2011 02:32:11 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Help me with my script]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/215147/#p215147</link>
			<description><![CDATA[like show the past when amset was alive?]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (legostothemax)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sat, 07 May 2011 20:57:49 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Help me with my script]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/215060/#p215060</link>
			<description><![CDATA[I find the opening boring... you could better explain Amset-Ra with images and short story before the two go on the quest.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (TitanPictures)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Sat, 07 May 2011 15:24:57 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Help me with my script]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/214875/#p214875</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Well, what I would do is make the meeting of the two longer and the explanation of the map shorter. And then chop the thing down. :)]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[edw.boomer@gmail.com (Eddie)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Fri, 06 May 2011 13:50:26 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Help me with my script]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/214871/#p214871</link>
			<description><![CDATA[When I write scripts, I usually add another character: the camera.
What that does is, for example, CAM: Tracks Jake. Or, CAM: Slow zoom toward Prof.
It makes things easier later in the process.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[ackar99@gmail.com (ZP)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Fri, 06 May 2011 13:11:54 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Help me with my script]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/214859/#p214859</link>
			<description><![CDATA[maybe you should add a bit more action :)]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (makerimages)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Fri, 06 May 2011 04:49:18 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Help me with my script]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/214809/#p214809</link>
			<description><![CDATA[There's a bit to much talking. If that talking part is 1 minute long...I'd cut it down a bit.(a lot)]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (VanderFlame Studios)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Thu, 05 May 2011 20:22:37 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Help me with my script]]></title>
			<link>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/214564/#p214564</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Ok, I'm making a new film called Pharaoh's Quest. Pharaoh's Quest is a 40 minute long stopmotion played at 15 FPS. I am already 10 minutes into the film but I relised that the script is very dull and boaring. I'm going to post the script below and I would like some ideas and opinions of the script and what i should do (you can also help me fix it up a bit) Should I just start from scratch. Please help me.

Opening shot:

(Jake on motorcycle) (professor is walking through desert)

Magnifying glass falls out of professor’s pocket.

Bends down to pick up

Jake swerves motorcycle out of the way of professor.

Motorcycle crashes

Stands up.

Jake: What are you doing?

Professor turns head. I’m searching for a map.

Jake: Where did you lose it?

Professor: well a while back at my last camp site.

Jake: Well I found this object in the sand a while back.

Jake tosses map.

Professor catches.

Professor observes map.

Professor: This is not the map I lost, for it is of something much greater.

Jake: What?

Professor: The lost treasure of Amset-Ra

Jake: Who?

Professor: The most deadly man to ever receive the Egyptian crown. I have only heard 
Rumors of the king but never thought much of them. What is your name, son?

Jake: My name is Jake Reins.

Professor: Well Jake it’s nice to meet ya. Hey have you ever thought of a job in archaeology, ha ha?

Jake: I don’t know. How much does it pay?

Professor: If this map turns out to be true, the value of all the possessions of Amset-Ra would be priceless.

Jake: I like the sound of that. What do I need to do for you?

Professor: As the prophecy pertold, on this map we will need 5 items that will be used as keys to reveal the location of they pyramid.

Jake: So all we need to do is get some hidden objects from the desert?

Professor: Not just any items, not only are they presented as they keys to the pyramid, but they were originally intended to be made of magic.

Jake: Listen, I don’t believe in the whole concept of prophecies, but I would be glad to help you as long as I get paid handsomely.

Professor: Jake, you shouldn’t be so fast to doubt things. When Amset-Ra was a king, he had six items crafted for him, each containing a magical element.

Jake: What kind of magic?

Professor: The golden crystal, contained the power to allow the king to control all creatures of the desert. The golden staff was made to make his servants that he truly believed in to be loyal even after death. The soul diamond allowed the king to create mirages to confuse his enemies. The golden sword allowed Amset-Ra to be able to destroy any object. The scarab shield was made of pure gold to allow nothing to pierce it. And the golden headdress allowed the king to live forever and see the future.

Jake: If the objects were real, then Amset would still be alive today.

Professor: Yes, but Amset died before the objects were completed, so he was buried with the headdress in hope one day he would come back to life. And the rest of the objects were hidden all across Egypt, so nobody could ever disturb the king.

Jake: Well that won’t stop us.

Professor: We are going to need help, someone who is good with motors.

Jake: Wait, I think I know someone who is good for that.

Professor: Who?

Jake: My old friend Mac McCloud. He can fly out here within the next day as long as he gets paid of course.]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[dummy@example.com (legostothemax)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Wed, 04 May 2011 01:33:51 +0000</pubDate>
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