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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Please Help With New Script Idea: Medieval Army Inspection]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[No. I already have like 10 knights, 12 army men, etc for both sides, cause I have that chess set.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[DerTarchin]]></name>
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			<updated>2010-08-27T01:35:25Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Please Help With New Script Idea: Medieval Army Inspection]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Lol.

Can't you get some new ones? 

Well, I suppose it's not worth it, lol.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Brickyman]]></name>
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			<updated>2010-08-26T22:31:19Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Please Help With New Script Idea: Medieval Army Inspection]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Sadly, i can't do that, my sister would kill me. Back when we used to play Knights Kingdom, the good knights were her first lego sets and she absolutely LOVED them, and in a way, through the personality she gave them, so did I. So, there is no way I can write a script that shows them as lazy without surviving to actually animate the film. :P]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[DerTarchin]]></name>
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			<updated>2010-08-26T15:16:07Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Please Help With New Script Idea: Medieval Army Inspection]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[You could do an opposite team...

Like make the good King too easy going, so all of his soldiers are lazy and undiciplined.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Brickyman]]></name>
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			<updated>2010-08-26T14:19:44Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Please Help With New Script Idea: Medieval Army Inspection]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Sorry for the Double Post. 

GUYS, I'll be animating this soon, I still need a few ideas, such as should I use magic or not. Even if youre not a BiM member and youre reading this, post an idea/revision on my channel. I need ideas and help! :twitch:]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[DerTarchin]]></name>
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			<updated>2010-08-26T14:17:37Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Please Help With New Script Idea: Medieval Army Inspection]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Yeah, I was going to do a Casting Call sometime soon- but I just started this lightsaber duel that is taking alot of my time. Check my sig for updates when I release something.

And you said magic is weird... any ideas for a substitute weapon/ability?  [i]Vulcan Deathgrip![/i] :lol:  JK

EDIT: Those of you who read these forums but aren't members [yet], post your ideas or revisions on my channel (assuming that you at least have a YouTube account). Just so that I don't leave you guys out.

Meanwhile, I still need to be completely sure this is the best script, so give me more ideas BiMers!]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[DerTarchin]]></name>
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			<updated>2010-08-24T22:32:12Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Please Help With New Script Idea: Medieval Army Inspection]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Lol, that sounds pwnsome.

Magic is a bit wierd though...

I'll do voices if you want.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Brickyman]]></name>
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			<updated>2010-08-24T22:20:55Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Please Help With New Script Idea: Medieval Army Inspection]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Guys, I need this soon, I'll be starting the animation soon.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[DerTarchin]]></name>
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			<updated>2010-08-24T22:05:32Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Please Help With New Script Idea: Medieval Army Inspection]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Well they all have axes, but maybe it can be a simple spear... Hmmm yeah. I also like the short guy idea. But how should I put it in? He blasts anyone who he doesnt' like, so instead of the "off with his head" sequence I should put him blasting everyone because of there size or weapon or dusty armor, etc. Hows that sound?

Anyone else with ideas?]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[DerTarchin]]></name>
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			<updated>2010-08-24T18:00:38Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Please Help With New Script Idea: Medieval Army Inspection]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Idk... Maybe one being a midget (short LEGO legs) so the king gets mad at him for not being tall enough. One not having a sword instead of and axe and then explaining that "The Bad People" (or however you wanna call them) were out of money so they gave him this.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[martx96]]></name>
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			<updated>2010-08-24T11:49:32Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Please Help With New Script Idea: Medieval Army Inspection]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Give me an example...]]></content>
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			<updated>2010-08-24T10:40:08Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[I think you should do more places in which the King gets angry at his soldiers like he got mad at the lefty guy.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[martx96]]></name>
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			<updated>2010-08-24T05:59:46Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Right. Pretty much I want to make an actual video for the first time, and I'm starting off with a medieval comedy. But personally, I think that the script needs a bit of work, especially near the end.
Feel free to post ideas or revisions to make this funnier and better.

Imagine a British comedy, and using the Legos from the old Knights Kingdom sets (the bad guys- Vladek's army).

[i]In the dungeons, all of the army are lined up, ax's held up straight, everyone looking foward.
The King comes walking by.
[b]King:[/b]  "Now, being in this castle will be a terrible experience, but if you do as i say, there might be the slimmest, tinniest, most miniscule chance that you'll survive. But if i see one nose hair out of line, what you'll go through will be worse than death itself. Might i add that you are completely daft to try to defy my rules in anyway, and that if such a thing happens, it will be my pleasure to squeeze all the life out of your sorry soul. In this castle all the rules shall be obeyed, and if i say you need to go out there on the front lines and die, you shall do that! Do you understand? Right now lets begin this inspection and you better hope i don't see a single thing wrong or you won't be leaving this dungeon anytime soon. Now, let's see... good, good, better, good, shave that beard, good, great, clean that armor, good, better, good... gasp... you little piece of grimy dirt! What do you think you're doing, holding that on the wrong hand?"
[b]Soldier:[/b]  "But sir, i- i- im a lefty, i swear, last inspection i asked you if it was okay-"
[b]King:[/b]  "Quiet you filthy gasbag, you ugly swine! i don't remember ever having such a discussion-"
[b]Soldier:[/b]  "But that's not exactly my fault, now is it-"
[b]King:[/b]  "Talking out of turn, now are we, you halfbrained nit wit, you fat-bottomed slime, you deserve the worst of my punishments-"
[b]Soldier:[/b]  "But its just the way i hold it, whats wrong with that?"
[b]King:[/b]  "I'll show you what's wrong with that."
So the King blasts him with his magical sorcerers staff, leaving nothing behind but a standing skeleton.
[b]King:[/b]  "OFF WITH HIS HEAD!"
[b]Soldier 2:[/b]  "But sir, he already dead."
[b]King:[/b]  (ignorantly) "No he isn't- he deserves more painful punishments-"
[b]Soldier 3:[/b]  "But sir, look at him, he hasn't got any brains left in him-"
[b]King:[/b]  "No, no, he needs to be punished-"
[b]Soldier 2:[/b]  "My lord, he can't possibly still be alive, look at him, he's just a bunch of" (Soldier pushes the skeleton, which crumbles) "dead bones."
[b]King:[/b]  "You dare speak against me?"
[b]Soldier 2:[/b]  "No, of course not-"
The King screams with rage and starts blasting soldiers left and right with his staff.
[b]King:[/b]  "This is what I think of you, and you aaand you were with him, weren't you?!!"[/i]

[i]In the castle of the "good" knights, all the men are sitting around a fire.
[b]Knight 1:[/b]  "...So I see him kill them one after the other, saying things like 'unloyal maggots' and 'you all deserve to die!'"
The knights all laugh.
[b]Knight 2:[/b]  "Seriously, if he keeps this up, he'll just be killing his men for us!"
[b]Knight 3:[/b]  "Yeah, the idiot."[/i]

The ending with the angry king may need a bit of revision. So help me here, guys, I want to get started, but I'm held up by the script problems. Post any ideas.

Thanks!]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[DerTarchin]]></name>
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			<updated>2010-08-24T00:59:48Z</updated>
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