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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: "The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[[quote=pizzaboy]I can play as the Gas clerk.....if i can send me a pm[/quote]


Gas Clerk is taken....]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[MOL]]></name>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: "The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[I can play as the Gas clerk.....if i can send me a pm]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[pizzaboy]]></name>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: "The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[It's good. 

Just two comments/questions:
- Why does Sean ask if someone is in the men's room if he's at home (there are very rarely people in the men's room in [i]my[/i] house without me knowing! (Unless my wife has certain secrets for me...))
- Exactly how do they pull the prank, how did they know what numbers to use on a fake ticket, when did they do it, etc... Maybe you could make the viewer an accomplice in the prank? Or explain using a flashback in the kitchen?

Eitherway, I'd happily record (provided I get my mic to work) any of the voices for you, if you don't object to a rather stupid sounding, deep voice (i.e. mine) and a noticeable foreign accent. Just shoot me an e-mail if you want to take me up on this offer.

-PG]]></content>
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			<updated>2009-01-17T19:38:11Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[i liked it! ill be looking forward to it]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Gree]]></name>
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			<updated>2009-01-09T23:46:18Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: "The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[[quote=TheNoodle26]Oh. Well, I read this one, and I'm a little confused what happens at the end. Other than that, looks good.[/quote]

Oh, you find out that they pranked him, they go to tell him, then he shouts.... really badly..... ya.....]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[MOL]]></name>
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			<updated>2009-01-07T02:00:58Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Oh. Well, I read this one, and I'm a little confused what happens at the end. Other than that, looks good.]]></content>
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			<updated>2009-01-07T01:50:19Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[[quote=TheNoodle26]What happened to [url=http://www.bricksinmotion.com/forums/topic/293/jason-bourne-is-dead/]this[/url]?[/quote]

Oh, that, it is still happening, this is just a short one while i wait for some new lego sets i ordered for it to come in the mail. ;)]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[MOL]]></name>
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			<updated>2009-01-07T00:03:19Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: "The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[What happened to [url=http://www.bricksinmotion.com/forums/topic/293/jason-bourne-is-dead/]this[/url]?]]></content>
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			<updated>2009-01-06T22:59:59Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[It sounds great! I'd like play the role Sean.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[mcoov]]></name>
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			<updated>2009-01-06T19:32:08Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA["The Lottery" Script. I need feedback.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Here's my new comedy brickfilm, the lottery, based on something that happened to one of my friends family.(except i over-dramatized the gloating...) I also need voice actors for the clerk, TV Announcer, Sebastian, And Sean, so check the Audio section for the full over view. But, without further 'a' do, I give you: THE LOTTERY by KJW

[url]http://pc.celtx.com/project/8wO5aqrV0ltb/view/http://celtx.com/res/1kEqvojZWTHA[/url]]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[MOL]]></name>
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			<updated>2009-01-06T05:10:11Z</updated>
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