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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: BRAWL 2015: Just A Scratch]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[I was interested within the first 5 seconds of this film. The opening grabbed me and I wanted to know what was going on immediately. I thought the script was tight, and I liked how you didn't spoon-feed the audience with "As you know, Bob..." dialog. The animation was fine, nothing outstanding but it served the story. Unfortunately sound design was pretty poor: some characters audio levels were too low and others too high. Also, most of the shots were way too dark. Despite these flaws, I enjoyed this film, and it was in my top ten list I sent to the judges. I'd like to see more films like this from you.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Nathan Wells]]></name>
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			<updated>2015-08-06T21:41:22Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[I finally got to watch this by myself. One thing that definitely stuck out was the lighting, I wish it had been brighter, but you already mentioned that. The other thing you may want to do in the future is re-approach the volume of speech in your films. It wasn't an issue in A Fresh Start'n, but here, some dialogue was incredibly loud while other dialogue was much harder to hear. I guess my only other complaint would be the ending, I don't know what happened.

Apart from that, it was a good film, one of the better ones to come out of the contest.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[RealBrick]]></name>
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			<updated>2015-07-26T16:00:11Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: BRAWL 2015: Just A Scratch]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Thanks for the feedback, you guys! As you might be able to guess, this isn't my usual forte, so I'm glad that people liked it a bit!

This was my first film made with a DSLR, so I was really trying to push in terns of what I could accomplish with dark locations and lighting, so I do admit that a couple of shots may have been to much on the dark side. And yeah, the credits were a little bit corny. Kinda weird ending this super serious film with a clip of a barbarian hitting a carrot, no? :lol:]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Sonjira]]></name>
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			<updated>2015-07-26T13:53:09Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Wow, so weird to see you making a serious film, and a violent one at that! Regardless, the pacing was pretty good, the animation was decent, and the cinematography was neat. Very cool story and flashbacks. Pretty good film you've made!]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Randomboaz]]></name>
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			<updated>2015-07-26T05:47:45Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Wow, what a film. It's definitely not your usual comedy, it was a lot darker. But that doesn't mean it was bad, I actually enjoyed it (as much as one can enjoy a film with that level of violence ;) ). The plot grabbed me, though, I wanted to know why all this was happening. You handled this very well, the flashbacks were perfect. I think the voice for the rough guy with the black hair was a bit off, because he didn't sound quite rough enough. Also, the credits music seemed a bit corny and didn't really match, but neither of those were big deals. Keep up the good work!]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[rioforce]]></name>
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			<updated>2015-07-26T02:48:27Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Transitions were cool and it seemed interesting, however I couldn't really tell a lot of what was going on because the lighting was so dark.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[LiamG]]></name>
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			<updated>2015-07-26T00:31:47Z</updated>
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				<name><![CDATA[Sonjira]]></name>
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			<updated>2015-07-25T23:13:05Z</updated>
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