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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: The Lego City Crimes]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Thanks for the tips. and I agree the story was lacking and I was talking a bit quietly into the mic so I'll try to do better next Brickfilm.]]></content>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Nicely animated. :)
While the animation was quite decent (a few jerky motions), the story was lacking. The joke in the middle about [spoiler]the parking violation[/spoiler] was funny, but it kinda fell flat without any strong follow up joke. Also, ending without a strong punchline was a slight let down (seeing as how there seemed to be a build up towards the end). One final thing is that the voice acting could have been better. The voice for the police chief sounded as though the person was talking quietly into the mic instead of talking normally a short distance from the mic.
That being said, I enjoyed it and it was animated quite nicely! I only say what I said so that you can improve. :)
Keep up the good work!]]></content>
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			<updated>2015-05-26T02:54:41Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[The Lego City Crimes]]></title>
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[b]The Lego City Crimes[/b]

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These are dark days in Lego City with murders, bank robbers and worst of all parking violations! What will the Lego Police do?]]></content>
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