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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: The Challenge: Level 1 (Backflip)]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Thanks for the feedback Pritchard. I'll try adding a few different camera angles next time, and make sure none of the scenes go on for any longer than they have to be. I think I may have to experiment with my camera shots a bit more, and I'll definitely need to improve on Steve's voice...

Again, I really appreciate your feedback. It helps a lot]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[CheekiGhost]]></name>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Great job on the backflip, as well as the opening hat flip.
Both movements are smooth, and the masking is flawless. Little details like the hat flip, while they take a lot of work, add quite a bit to the film. Although the camera movement may not have been necessary. 

It feels that, for so simple a short, it needed to be condensed a bit. It felt over-long just to set up the "levels" concept and execute the flip. Some of the framing could have been better balanced, and the camera angles were mostly straight-on and flat, which didn't add much visual appeal to the scenes. 

Sam's voice is good, but Steve's just doesn't sound as great, and his delivery of some lines killed a bit of the humor.

I don't think the flaws are in the concept, or even in the writing so much. But the execution can make or break so simple a concept, and this does need a bit more inventiveness in how it's shot and performed to stick out among similar videos that are out there.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Pritchard Studios]]></name>
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[b]The Challenge: Level 1 (Backflip)[/b]

[url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y1s7Yzv8H2Q]YouTube Land[/url]

The Challenge is a new series, involving a guy called Sam who is instructed to do various challenges in order to pass to the next level. In level 1, Sam must successfully land a backflip.

Let me know what you think
(P.s. Steve is the man of all accents... don't judge!)]]></content>
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