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YOU MAKE LEGOs?!?!?!

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I actually thought of that when I wrote it. :)

Thank you for your feedback on my short. I agree that some of the sounds don't completely fit / are annoying. I will improve with practice. As for the timing and voice acting, I agree with that as well. Again, practice, some experience, and some more practice should help me improve.
Thank you,
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This is my second film for my channel. It took around a week to finish. Everything in this video was made by me.

Any critiques or suggestions for future films are welcome.[/quote]

YOU MAKE LEGOs?!?!?!

All jokes aside, short and funny in a dark way. The animation and lighting were all good for the purpose, not amazing but there wasn't anything bad to pick out of them. If this is your second brickfilm I am impressed with the quality. The cup spilling was a very nice touch. In terms of suggestions, this was in a way supposed to be a comedy so maybe get the timing and voicing down in a more comedic way in the future. And also, I personally found the footstep sounds annoying. But again, I found it amusing, and so therefore it has already succeeded in its purpose. Keep up the good work. : D]]></content>
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[b]Hunting Incident[/b]

[url=http://youtu.be/2m9OdLoz_D8]YouTube[/url]

This is my second film for my channel. It took around a week to finish. Everything in this video was made by me.

Any critiques or suggestions for future films are welcome.]]></content>
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