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	<title type="html"><![CDATA[Forums - Bricks in Motion - Lord of The Thing - PART 2]]></title>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Lord of The Thing - PART 2]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[[quote=Max Butcher]I'm actually really tempted to do a 'directors cut' of the first episode that trims things down a bit. I could also re-record some of the dialogue, although that would be much more difficult. The downside of the 'improve-as-I-go-along' format is that the stuff at the start is going to be inferior. [/quote]

I missed this post, but would love to see a cut were you put the cut back into the directors cut. Maybe when all of them are completed a version of all of them edited together?]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[SlothPaladin]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-09-21T04:48:19Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Lord of The Thing - PART 2]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Awesome job. I laughed out loud during [spoiler]the anvil scene.[/spoiler] Once again, you've got a great script going for you here, and a fun story that keeps me interested. And I'm glad you took our advice with the voices; it helped you out a lot with Part Two.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Mickey]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-09-08T12:23:49Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Lord of The Thing - PART 2]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[[quote=SlothPaladin]A lot of fun, better then the first[/quote]

I'm actually really tempted to do a 'directors cut' of the first episode that trims things down a bit. I could also re-record some of the dialogue, although that would be much more difficult. The downside of the 'improve-as-I-go-along' format is that the stuff at the start is going to be inferior. 

I wanted the first episode to be a fast-paced swashbuckle, but I had no choice but to slow the plot down so I could establish stuff - like John being so reluctant to go on the quest that he has to be kidnapped, Wormface being obviously evil, the King being utterly incompetent, and Whitebeard being a crackpot who doesn't really have a plan. I tried to introduce these traits whilst still being funny, but there was probably a better way of doing this. But that's all out of the way now. From here on it's just going to be a parade of glorious madness.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Max Butcher]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-09-07T15:24:39Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Lord of The Thing - PART 2]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[That turned out well! Nice work. Elliot will be thrilled to hear his voice in it and see his name in the credits.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[jay]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-09-06T10:49:02Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Lord of The Thing - PART 2]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[[quote=togfox]Great dialogue.  Did you write that yourself?[/quote]

No. My dear friend Bax Mutcher wrote it. He's exactly like me only attractive, charismatic, witty, sucessful, and talented. He also runs fight clubs in the evening and makes soap.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Max Butcher]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-09-06T07:17:52Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Lord of The Thing - PART 2]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[A lot of fun, better then the first]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[SlothPaladin]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-09-06T05:24:24Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Great dialogue.  Did you write that yourself?]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[togfox]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-09-06T04:52:38Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Lord of The Thing - PART 2]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA["Wouldn't it be terrible if we hadn't seen it". Lol, darn you.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Brickelodeon]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-09-05T22:15:13Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Nice! The animation is a bit choppy sometimes but the story is just great! Very funny and well written.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[SplitterShot]]></name>
				<email><![CDATA[james-wow11@hotmail.com]]></email>
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			<updated>2014-09-05T21:55:53Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Lord of The Thing - PART 2]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[[url=https://bricksinmotion.com/films/view/6087]Directory Link[/url]

[b]Lord of The Thing - PART 2 [/b]

[url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OahwtoSBAGk]YouTube[/url]

The adventure continues!

VIEW PART 1 [url=http://youtu.be/dL1Jo3l7DOU]HERE.[/url] 

As before, feedback is greatly appreciated.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Max Butcher]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-09-05T21:40:35Z</updated>
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