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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Noir Sci-Fi Script]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[I love it!
If you really work on improving your animation, and add to that a great voice cast, then this short can really come alive. It's a great script, and is worthy of a top-notch execution. :yes: 

Random question: How are you planning on merging the more desaturated color tones of noir with the more colorful and flashy effects and designs this seems to call for? Sci-fi and noir seem to almost the opposites, yet I think if you could nail the right balance, then it would have a delightfully new and original feel. 

If anything, the script itself leans more to the sci-fi side, so I suggest adding design cues and more visual hints that emphasize the noir side of things.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Pritchard Studios]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-08-05T03:14:05Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Noir Sci-Fi Script]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Last summer I shot some test footage of soldier fighting in some ruins, and since then I've been wanting to make a short film around it. I just finished scripting a story for it, and I was wondering if someone would be willing to give feedback on it.

Warning: This would be fairly spoilerly if you watch the finished product
[url]https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m6NqJdi3vqS419pkU2AiHYt6Libql5EWAG3-RUq30Js/edit?usp=sharing[/url]]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Willco66]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-08-05T02:56:36Z</updated>
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