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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: What can I do to make this better?]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[I personally liked it. Very good quality, animation. The walk cycle did look a little awkward, though.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[LASF]]></name>
				<email><![CDATA[lasfbrickfilms@gmail.com]]></email>
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			<updated>2013-02-05T16:43:06Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: What can I do to make this better?]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Well, one thing is for sure: the music makes it sound whimsical.  Very cool so far.  I love the Apple Tree House.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[HoldingOurOwn]]></name>
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			<updated>2013-02-04T14:20:46Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: What can I do to make this better?]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[I would say slightly re-do your set so the path turns at a right angle instead of being on a diagonal, and then re-shoot it using a proper walk cycle. I liked the rest of it though, the cartoony style of the dog was nice. :)]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[backyardlegos]]></name>
				<email><![CDATA[backyardlegos@gmail.com]]></email>
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			<updated>2013-02-04T06:00:42Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[I was confused on the walk cycle. It seems as though he just skipped across the sidewalk.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[jediknight1997]]></name>
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			<updated>2013-02-04T04:36:40Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: What can I do to make this better?]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[If your satisfied with it, keep it. If your not, re-do it. It's clear that your not very satisfied with it. That's all I have to say.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[GHB]]></name>
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			<updated>2013-02-04T03:37:40Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[What can I do to make this better?]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[I am working on a brickfilm about a guy who goes shopping for his wife at this crazy store with crazy people, as his homicidal dog stalks him, and I animated this little clip (with out sound effects) and put it here:

[url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7azyzfy5lyY[/url]

looking back at it, I don't think I like it. the camera jumps at one point and the lighting is pretty bad, should I re-animate it? If so, what should I do better and how?]]></content>
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			<updated>2013-02-04T02:09:31Z</updated>
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