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	<title type="html"><![CDATA[Forums - Bricks in Motion - Test Fire 1 and 2]]></title>
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	<updated>2009-03-24T03:34:23Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Test Fire 1 and 2]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/33419/#p33419"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[The timing of the gun's explosion in the second one was perfect. "Oh yeah I feel safe. Trying to g-[b]*KABOOM!!*[/b]"]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[B-Squared]]></name>
				<uri>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/user/466/</uri>
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			<updated>2009-03-24T03:34:23Z</updated>
			<id>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/33419/#p33419</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Test Fire 1 and 2]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/31357/#p31357"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Thanks for the feedback, all of your comments will help me make my next film better.]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[1Shifty89]]></name>
				<uri>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/user/500/</uri>
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			<updated>2009-03-17T11:38:37Z</updated>
			<id>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/31357/#p31357</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Test Fire 1 and 2]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[If those are your first, than that's really good. :)

The animation itself was pretty good, the only thing was there was quite a bit of set/camera bumping and some light flicker, but you'll learn how to avoid those.  I also liked the concept, this could be a good series if you continue with it.  I thought your timing was good and the voice acting was generally good, although voicing two characters with the same voice gets kind of confusing :P

Just a couple rookie mistakes (that we all make) that you need to fix and you'll be well on your way.  I look forward to your next film.]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[Fancypants]]></name>
				<uri>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/user/72/</uri>
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			<updated>2009-03-17T04:04:35Z</updated>
			<id>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/31333/#p31333</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Test Fire 1 and 2]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[goldenbrick, "Test Fire" refers to the story; these aren't tests.

Nice for a first try, the animation was decent and I liked the sets.  I thought the voice acting could have been more engaging but the timing was pretty good.  The foam effect at the end of the second one worked well.]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[Sméagol]]></name>
				<uri>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/user/28/</uri>
			</author>
			<updated>2009-03-17T04:00:17Z</updated>
			<id>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/31331/#p31331</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Test Fire 1 and 2]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/31317/#p31317"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Good, but it goes under [i]Tests[/i]]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Goldenbrick]]></name>
				<uri>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/user/161/</uri>
			</author>
			<updated>2009-03-17T02:45:01Z</updated>
			<id>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/31317/#p31317</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Test Fire 1 and 2]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[It was good, although the blaster fire in the backgroung got a little annoying :P

-Jon64]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[Jon64]]></name>
				<email><![CDATA[jemunoz95@gmail.com]]></email>
				<uri>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/user/148/</uri>
			</author>
			<updated>2009-03-17T02:41:48Z</updated>
			<id>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/31316/#p31316</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Test Fire 1 and 2]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[I liked it. the voices were better then I thought they would be and the animation was pretty good.]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[lego2motion]]></name>
				<uri>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/user/385/</uri>
			</author>
			<updated>2009-03-17T02:40:54Z</updated>
			<id>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/31315/#p31315</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Test Fire 1 and 2]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[These are the first films I've made. Just looking for some feedback.thanks:)
 [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9ALQoHibCJg[/url]

[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6kQKVTF9daw[/url]]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[1Shifty89]]></name>
				<uri>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/user/500/</uri>
			</author>
			<updated>2009-03-17T02:30:55Z</updated>
			<id>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/post/31312/#p31312</id>
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