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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: [BRAWL]Out of Order]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[So am I but unfortionatly I didn't write the script for this video]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Lucas]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-16T22:21:23Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: [BRAWL]Out of Order]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Sure, I'm pretty good at writing.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[RealBrick]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-16T21:15:03Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: [BRAWL]Out of Order]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[This is whole film [i]loosely[/i] based on a true story. The whole thing about the monitors is made up, because I need a reason, and I needed it right then. I did not know the real reason why no one saved Nicholas in reality. I admit, I need to research this story more, and maybe add a lawsuit in the final cut as was originally planned. Because in reality, Nicholas is a multi-millionaire because of the ordeal he suffered. If you could help me in the writing process, that would be excellent.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Living LEGO]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-16T20:18:38Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: [BRAWL]Out of Order]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[I am aware of what a plot hole is. I guess I said that incorrectly. You made the protagonist get stuck in an elevator, then he gets stuck in it, but nobody saves him because the monitors are down due to a soda spill. That just comes across to me as a big coincidence.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[RealBrick]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-16T19:55:26Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: [BRAWL]Out of Order]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Youu... do know what plot holes mean right? There are no plot holes in this video.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Lucas]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-16T19:49:30Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: [BRAWL]Out of Order]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Yeah, I'm going to do a redux of the whole thing, methinks. Redoing all the animation and everything. The drink spill was an explanation of why the guy was stuck for 41 hours. I will add a time lapse thingy-ma-jig, and will probably redo the elevator sequences (no offense to Lucas). This film wasn't as fitting for BRAWL as I had hoped, it was a little to big for me at the time. I hope to finish the redux by next year if I can. I would do it sooner, but going to college and high school at the same time consumes a lot of time.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Living LEGO]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-16T19:48:42Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: [BRAWL]Out of Order]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[I'm going to be very honest and say that I was a bit confused. Based on what I was told and what I saw, I am unsure of what the mood you were going for was. Animation was a bit choppy, and I would have really liked to see some shots that conveyed the elevator as tight space.  I can't say the speak of the devil drink spill was all too fitting, and the whole ending in text was a bit disappointing. I hope you try to fix these plot holes and problems in the future, but the film was a little disappointing.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[RealBrick]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-16T19:44:45Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[I'd really appreciate feedback on what I can improve for the final cut that I plan to release.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Living LEGO]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-16T19:39:34Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[yaaaay olol]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Lucas]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-16T18:33:31Z</updated>
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[b][BRAWL]Out of Order[/b]

[url=http://vimeo.com/27778918]Vimeo[/url]
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tARqqWOAkN0&feature=channel_video_title]Youtube[/url]

This is only a slightly edited version of the collab that I did with Lucas Mass for BRAWL 2011. I was short on time and cut a third of the script off. I am planning on releasing a better version of this film soon as a separate project.
EDIT: I know this isn't my best film, fyi. 
Lucas did the parts inside the elevator, I did everything outside the elevator, btw.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Living LEGO]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-16T17:50:50Z</updated>
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