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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: BRAWL 2011 Saltman: Burden of Hope]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[perfect animation when saltman dropped in

but you need to clean your pieces]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[mobiledeli]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-17T20:35:15Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: BRAWL 2011 Saltman: Burden of Hope]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Thanks everyone! I didn't expect this much feedback. I will have to agree with everyone in saying that the editing was weird and the sounds at the beginning were muffled. I guess the one-week time period ended up biting us XD . I actually really like that line that you gave us and we'll try to use it in the next episode. Thanks guys, keep the comments coming.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Juggernaut Pictures]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-15T17:46:30Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: BRAWL 2011 Saltman: Burden of Hope]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[I liked the concept, and it was executed pretty well. My only gripe is the weird editing and fake-sounding voice acting at the beginning.

-JK]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Just Kidden]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-15T17:41:35Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: BRAWL 2011 Saltman: Burden of Hope]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Haha, that was funny. I think a suitable comment would be "Take that with a grain of salt", but I don't have any real context to put it in. Your animation is certainly improving anyway, good job.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Onion]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-15T17:36:28Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: BRAWL 2011 Saltman: Burden of Hope]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[I liked this. The animation was solid and the simple sets worked well in my opinion. The voice acting was very good, except it was little off sync at the start. Good job :)]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Brain Wave]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-15T16:51:12Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: BRAWL 2011 Saltman: Burden of Hope]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Not bad, I enjoyed it :)

[b]   ____________
  
   -Story: 6/10
   -Cinematography: 4/10
   -Sound: 3/10
   -Voices: 7/10
   -Animation: 6/10
   -Effects: 6/10
   -Music: 7/10[/b]
   
[b][size=large]→OVERALL: 6.5/10[/size][/b]]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Loïc F-B]]></name>
				<email><![CDATA[loicfbproductions@gmail.com]]></email>
				<uri>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/user/1430/</uri>
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			<updated>2011-08-15T15:52:42Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: BRAWL 2011 Saltman: Burden of Hope]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Animation and acting at the beginning wasn't too great, it seemed a bit fake, and there were some mic pop noises.

But the way Saltman dropped in was fabulous. :D
The fight seemed a bit weird, but the animation in that scene is still your best.
I enjoyed the joke at the end.

All in all, your best film.
2nd favorite in this contest I've seen so far.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Squid]]></name>
				<uri>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/user/3704/</uri>
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			<updated>2011-08-15T13:19:02Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: BRAWL 2011 Saltman: Burden of Hope]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Thanks guys. The goal with Saltman was to create a very unique hero. It certainly had its upside... And its downside. When he was shot, he was supposed to be turning into salt, but I'm afraid it didn't turn out too well. :P  Anyway, thank you for the feedback, it is greatly appreciated.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Juggernaut Pictures]]></name>
				<uri>https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/user/1880/</uri>
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			<updated>2011-08-15T13:14:54Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: BRAWL 2011 Saltman: Burden of Hope]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Aside from the bad audio quality, the voicing wasn't bad at all. The story was pretty too the point, and would have benefitted from a better set-up, but of course it was only created in a week. The spinning S felt a out of place, and looked to CGI-esque to be a Superhero logo. Also, besides torturing with salt what has Saltman to do with salt exactly? Anyway, you've improved greatly over a short period of time (especialy technically), keep on filming. 3/5]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Pillow]]></name>
				<email><![CDATA[vik12312@hotmail.com]]></email>
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			<updated>2011-08-15T13:12:01Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: BRAWL 2011 Saltman: Burden of Hope]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[Hurray for Saltman! Haha. I absolutely love this entry! Though the audio had some noise in the background, I still love this. The animation was great! And at [color=white]"Let's just say I used salt." "Ahhhh! It burns my eyes!"[/color] I laughed. Great job! 5 out of 5.

-LASF]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[LASF]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-08-15T13:11:32Z</updated>
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[b]BRAWL 2011 Saltman: Burden of Hope[/b]

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Made for BRAWL 2011.]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Juggernaut Pictures]]></name>
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