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What happens when an ordinary business man finds the true meaning of April Fools' Day? Find out in this wonderful wacky tale of wonder.

Supermelty Productions

Re: Steve's Magical April 1st

Nice job! It was smoothly animated and I liked the concept. mini/smile

You are never too old to set another goal or to dream a new dream. -C.S. Lewis

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Wow. I was impressed. The story was great. This was an entry into the "Fooled" contest right? I love how there are some really high quality long entries. Can't wait to see your next film. mini/smile

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Brick Block Animations wrote:

Wow. I was impressed. The story was great. This was an entry into the "Fooled" contest right? I love how there are some really high quality long entries. Can't wait to see your next film. mini/smile

Yeah I entered this in the contest. Thanks for the encouragement!:D

Supermelty Productions

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This was pretty great! It was very funny and the writing was by far the strongest element of the film. The animation was generally good, aside from a few scenes where it was fairly motionless, I felt that way especially in that black and white scene in particular - that moment was literally a couple of photos with audio. Otherwise,  a really nice spin on the contest, with great writing, and a good story! 4/5!

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William Osborne wrote:

This was pretty great! It was very funny and the writing was by far the strongest element of the film. The animation was generally good, aside from a few scenes where it was fairly motionless, I felt that way especially in that black and white scene in particular - that moment was literally a couple of photos with audio. Otherwise,  a really nice spin on the contest, with great writing, and a good story! 4/5!

Yes I totally agree with you on the motionless dialogue. That is something I am hoping to improve on in the future. Thank you for the compliments on my writing. I am very proud with the script and hope to continue with good stories. Personally, the story is the best part of a film. I sometimes cant stand watching a brick film with no story.
Anyways, thank you.

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Supermelty wrote:

Personally, the story is the best part of a film. I sometimes cant stand watching a brick film with no story.

I can relate to that. You can't beat a good story. I hope to see more from you in the future!

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https://goo.gl/stcePM                                               
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