Topic: Stealth Mode Sith

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Stealth Mode Sith

https://youtu.be/25IitruOu4k

Constructive Criticism is appreciated!

Re: Stealth Mode Sith

Hmm. The link doesn't seem to be working. Here is the correct link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=25IitruOu4k

LEGO Star Wars - Stealth Mode Sith is a well made, suspense driven short. It is complete with good quality animation, dynamic lighting, complementary music, and convincing visual effects. One shot in particular that I am very impressed with is the shot of the tree sniper's scope. The camera pan across the forest floor combined with the gun's crosshairs really makes for a sleek effect. 

Also, the ending of the film, I thought worked well. It is even more satisfactorily terrifying for the viewer to imagine the ending rather than have it visually displayed.

Great work, OnecrasFilms!

Re: Stealth Mode Sith

I have to admit I was half-expecting the Sith to say "I never really was on your side..." at the end... mini/lol

Nice work here.  The animation is smooth, and the sniper-scope effect is great.  The cinematography is well-done too, (the scope effect and the pans works really well together, as Willow Tree mentioned), though I feel that the shot introducing the sniper could have been better (it would have been better to show where he was in relation to the rest of the team, rather than have a comparatively random-seeming cut), and the cut between the two final shots was slightly awkward.  Also, the set looks a bit basic, and some of the digital effects (particularly the debris falling with the battle droid) would have looked better if they had been done in-camera.  Nevertheless, these are some pretty minor complaints overall, and you've done a great job!

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