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The Schneider family contend with the everyday world again.  Brent fixes his television set.  Subsequently, Angela decides to go to work.  Featuring the voices of:

Michael Tourette (HoldingOurOwn):
-Brent Schneider
-Max Grody
-Yosatuba
-Kaiwoi

Mary Charles (Brick7):
-Angela Schenider
-WHYU Chorus

AnimeNinja:
-Melissa Schneider

Brandon Fields (DarthVincentPrice)
-Johnny Strange

Eric Kutepow
-Mark Manchester

Mike Shields
-Hector Bing

Alanna Carnie (AC Films)
-Chay Tangemann

Jakunen Neesan
-Carleigh Zeitz

Robert Moore (Chiro)
-Larry

Angela Tourette
-Station Secretary

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I liked the cartoon bit. that was my favourite part of the episode. I wait for episode 2b in anticipation.

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jediknight1997 wrote:

I liked the cartoon bit. that was my favourite part of the episode. I wait for episode 2b in anticipation.

That cartoon is actually a parody of a Japanese Manga, "Yotsuba".  The series was never made into an actual cartoon.  the next segment will be up, hopefully, Friday.  Otherwise, Monday.

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Well, the animation in ep 2 has improved compared to first ep.

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Thanks.  Besides having 22 minutes of animation experience between eps 1 and 2, I also increased the frame rate from 10 to 15 fps.  The final segment of episode 2 you'll find is also smoother than the first segment.  The radio station set gave me the most trouble; it was a confined space to work with as many as 4 minifigures at once, and there is more flickering maybe because of the white walls and other factors.  I kept bumping the props in the set.

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I try to keep away from small-built sets. I look forward to watching the rest.

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jediknight1997 wrote:

I try to keep away from small-built sets. I look forward to watching the rest.

Well, I learned by doing.  My Lego collection isn't so vast, though, so I'll ahve to compromise between size and availability.  Thanks also for letting my know your thoughts on the story.

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No problem, I also have a small collection of LEGO.

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A great first segment! I think the animation improved, since the first episode. I also liked the anime bit and the transition music at 8:42. But, you must tell me; is there a joke behind "the year is 2009" joke at the beginning of each episode? Like the one that is shown at 0:39.

Have you seen a big-chinned boy?

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Hi.  The transition music is actually an 80's-esque version of the "normal" transition music.  So episode 2 has 2 types of transition music: one regular, and the 80s-style music before every Radio station scene.  I composed that and the "Yosatuba" theme music.  The "Yosatuba" song is actually a song with lyrics called "V.P.L.", which I wrote and recorded on my band Tinnitis' 2008 album, "Friut Punch".

The "2009" caption isn't actually a joke, but just the setting for the story.  There are two reasons: #1) I realize that making brickfilms of this length take a long time, and we all are aging at a rate much faster than the cast, so I wanted to "freeze" the technology at 2009.  Throughout the scripts (I'm writing episode 5 right now), events are referred to within that time frame.  For instance, when we first meet Brent and Angela in episode 1 says she hopes her surprise from him wasn't "Another 100 shares of CIrcuit City stock."  Circuit City declared bankruptcy December 31, 2008.  Episode 4 sets Melissa's birthday at August 8, 1993.  In episode 2, when Johnny Strange was flipping the channels, all of the programs were on TV that year.  Included is an old "Vytorin" commercial, which was pulled from the market late in 2009.  I miss those commercials.  They showed people that looked like food.  When watching the episodes, look around for references to life in 2009.  I stick them in everywhere, but keep it subtle, unlike the "Wedding Singer" scene when a character is using a Rubik's cube as an obvious 80s reference.  I love that movie.

The second reason for using 2009 is that it's the year that, in my opinion, things started happening that don't make a lot of sense.  If I ever get a lot of episodes under my belt, the year will turn to 2010.

One more thing.  I forgot that my gracious wife, Angela Tourette, is the voice of a character in segment 4.  I will return to the original post and fix it.

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OMG
OMG
OMG

YOTSUBA& REFERENCE IN ACTUAL BRICKFILM

You did fabulously! Of course there were a few rough edges but I don't wanna talk about that because the creativity behind this was so strong.

And if you didn't pick up on it the anime part has got to be my favorite part! Everything about that scene emulated silly anime shows perfectly! I lol'd.

Also I am glad you are cutting down on the laugh tracks. I noticed that in the first one there was a laugh after every single line. I feel like the amount of laughtrack you have now is better. Is that real? Like, did you record the laughs?

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Oh, someone get the "Yotsuba &" spoof!  Not intended to offend fans, even though she suffers much more than in the original manga.  The Anime bit seems to be the most popular part.  The series does a lot of spoofery at the entertainment culture.  You noticed that Yosatuba's talk cycles are much different than the style I've developed for the regular cast (she just jumps super-hyper).  I made her sound hyper as I could too, spoofing the hyper genre.  (That's me as Yosatuba and Kaiwoi both, very different from my Brent voice.)  The style I developed for normal talk cycles was based in part on watching minifigures talk in the Joe Brickmond series.  You'll notice a blue bird that moves occassionally on the wall in the Yosatuba segment.  That's the same bird (or a lookalike) of the blue bird that gets eaten by a cat in episode 1.

The laughter is a compilation of 300+ laughs that I painstakingly assembled and edited from seasons 1 and 2 of "Everybody Loves Raymond".  In between episodes, I try to add another 50 or so.  About 80% of laughs from the actual source audio are unusable, as the trail end of the laughing mixes with the dialogue of the next person speaking.  I actually tried to time the laughter in episode 2 in the same way that I noticed it in Raymond.  I also brought the laughter volume lower so the characters can speak more continuously over it.  If you watch Raymond, you'll see that the characters actually pause a lot during the laughs, which I tried in episode 1 but it didn't translate well, especially since I try to write the laugh lines in a rapid-fire style.  But I try to stick in a stray single person laughing and I want to add some coughing to put in subtly in future episodes, so it has the live audience, the show must go on no matter the reaction, sound from "All In The Family".  Thanks a lot for enjoying it, and segment 2 is coming up soon.

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Another note about the 2009 setting: because of this, the following things don't exist in the "Holding Our Own" universe:

Monster High
iPad
Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey
Gangnam Style
The Hub
Terrafugia
MyKey
Fijit Friends
Angry Birds
ABC's Pan-Am
Socialized Health Care in U.S.

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Ah, I see. 2009 was a great year... mini/smile

Have you seen a big-chinned boy?

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Mickey wrote:

Ah, I see. 2009 was a great year... mini/smile

Is that a commentary on the list of some things that weren't around in 2009?  Because some on the list I'd say, YES, and some, NO.  The Hub, for instance, is a good thing 2009 didn't have!

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All I remember about 2009, is, We got a new President, and I started animating on Youtube.

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There will be toy references to 2009 in the 4th segment of the episode.  By the way, I am shooting for Monday to post segment 2!  My friend Mike is the voice actor for Hector BIng, who is prominent in this segment, and we meet a new character, Max.

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I really liked it bud. Love the story and the characters. Look forward to seeing more of this series.

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Well, Hopefully Monday, you can, as I post segment 2!

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Episode 2, segment 2 should be up tomorrow!

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