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THAC 9: Joe the Coffee Obsessor

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For the Twenty-Four Hour Animation Contest (THAC) on Bricks in Motion.

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Your animation has improved.  I had no idea what was going though.

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Stoppedmotion wrote:

Your animation has improved.  I had no idea what was going though.

Thanks.
It would have made sense if I had including some other parts I was going to though ended up not showing the mod element or something like it.

So, I'll just sum up the story right here for people that don't understand.

Spoiler (highlight to read)Joe has an obsession for coffee. One day, he gets hired at a holiday themed toy shop. He gets happy, that's what's up with the weird dance. Then his boss, Joshua, comes back and finds out Joe gave all the kids coffee.
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Not bad, although the animation was quite nice the minifigures did some weird moves. I didn't really got the joke too, but it wasn't bad. I think the problem was it was very short. But yes, your animation has once again improved. You improve almost in every one of your film, and that you can't see every day.

3.8/5

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Tobias wrote:

Not bad, although the animation was quite nice the minifigures did some weird moves. I didn't really got the joke too, but it wasn't bad. I think the problem was it was very short. But yes, your animation has once again improved. You improve almost in every one of your film, and that you can't see every day.

3.8/5

Wow, this film definitely is getting the most positive feedback I've ever seen (for one of my films). Thanks for your comments!

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Not bad. mini/smile

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J.TProductions wrote:

Not bad. mini/smile

Thanks! What would you rate it?

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Anybody have anything to say before this goes down in the depths of the Release forum?

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Yes, I watched it and didn't understand a thing of what was going on. Technically, this was your best brickfilm: everything improved since last time, especially animation. But story wise, it was all hard to understand, most didn't seem to make sense until I read your spoiler, and voices were hard to understand, but probably all this was because it was for THAC. I think your best film is still The Room of Murders, but if you keep going like this you'll soon get better than this. It was average, but considering it's a THAC, it deserves at least 3/5.
We all said this, but I'll say it again: you're improving a lot.

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MPfist0 wrote:

Yes, I watched it and didn't understand a thing of what was going on. Technically, this was your best brickfilm: everything improved since last time, especially animation. But story wise, it was all hard to understand, most didn't seem to make sense until I read your spoiler, and voices were hard to understand, but probably all this was because it was for THAC. I think your best film is still The Room of Murders, but if you keep going like this you'll soon get better than this. It was average, but considering it's a THAC, it deserves at least 3/5.
We all said this, but I'll say it again: you're improving a lot.

Thanks for the comment! Joshua, the guy who yelled at Joe for

Spoiler (highlight to read)giving all the kids coffee,

voice was hard to understand because I forgot to tune the volume on that line up. I think 3 out of 5 bricks/stars is pretty good for a THAC film. Thanks!

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It was okay. I think technically this is your best film, but I think if you had gone with the original plan on DB than that would have had best story. Um, some parts were to quick paced but overall 3/5.

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Mr.Rundown101 wrote:

It was okay. I think technically this is your best film, but I think if you had gone with the original plan on DB than that would have had best story. Um, some parts were to quick paced but overall 3/5.

I don't know if I should be happy or sad that you thought that my THAC entry was my best film. mini/lol

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LASF wrote:
Mr.Rundown101 wrote:

It was okay. I think technically this is your best film, but I think if you had gone with the original plan on DB than that would have had best story. Um, some parts were to quick paced but overall 3/5.

I don't know if I should be happy or sad that you thought that my THAC entry was my best film. mini/lol

Well I actually think it was!

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I didn't really get the point of the story it was...a random/creative idea!
The animation was, like one other said, good in some parts. Although it did not effect the out come of the video, I think a better camera is the next step for you!

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DW|Storm wrote:

I didn't really get the point of the story it was...a random/creative idea!
The animation was, like one other said, good in some parts. Although it did not effect the out come of the video, I think a better camera is the next step for you!

My camera is fine it's just because my animation program was messing up the quality. The animation was best at the beginning though started flunking farther in IMO. Thanks for your comment.

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Haha, sorry I missed you.  I got interrupted in the middle of the entries so I still have a few left to post on. mini/wink
When I first saw the title for your film, I almost laughed out loud because it was so funny and random.  "Obsessor" is now a new word in my vocabulary.  The plot is a little random also, but executed in a clever, cartoonish way that is sure to bring a smile or two.  The animation is ok, but there is certainly room for a little improvement there. 
Despite those things, the film is quite enjoyable.  Great job!
When the kids freaked out, was the audio from Bruce Almighty?  Just so you know, That scene was my personal fav. mini/lol

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SuburbAnimationStudios wrote:

Haha, sorry I missed you.  I got interrupted in the middle of the entries so I still have a few left to post on. mini/wink
When I first saw the title for your film, I almost laughed out loud because it was so funny and random.  "Obsessor" is now a new word in my vocabulary.  The plot is a little random also, but executed in a clever, cartoonish way that is sure to bring a smile or two.  The animation is ok, but there is certainly room for a little improvement there. 
Despite those things, the film is quite enjoyable.  Great job!
When the kids freaked out, was the audio from Bruce Almighty?  Just so you know, That scene was my personal fav. mini/lol

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Also, about the audio, I've never seen Bruce Almighty so I wouldn't know. mini/tongue

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Pretty nice! Your animation is definitely improving, great job! mini/smile

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